Comments for Tea & Tunafish http://teaandtunafish.com Poetry, thoughts & other junk. Sun, 11 Jul 2010 17:40:57 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 Comment on On Writer’s Block: an Essay by Kayla http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=80&cpage=1#comment-89 Kayla Sun, 11 Jul 2010 17:40:57 +0000 http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=80#comment-89 So, this was a piece I wrote for my application to Otterbein. I guess they liked it! So, this was a piece I wrote for my application to Otterbein. I guess they liked it!

]]> Comment on Corolla, North Carolina by Heather from Kodiak HC http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=26&cpage=1#comment-45 Heather from Kodiak HC Thu, 19 Nov 2009 20:48:28 +0000 http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=26#comment-45 myrtle? amnestic? why can't people use words like that more often? (love the last sentence) myrtle? amnestic?

why can’t people use words like that more often?

(love the last sentence)

]]> Comment on [September Columbus] by Heather from Kodiak HC http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=30&cpage=1#comment-44 Heather from Kodiak HC Thu, 19 Nov 2009 19:16:33 +0000 http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=30#comment-44 I LOOOVE this one, it's so good! especially the first stanza. it's full of strong stark images, fresh original wording avoiding cliches... I feel like the poem keeps smacking me in the face. It's great. I LOOOVE this one, it’s so good!

especially the first stanza.

it’s full of strong stark images, fresh original wording avoiding cliches…

I feel like the poem keeps smacking me in the face. It’s great.

]]> Comment on [Untitled] by Heather from Kodiak HC http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=49&cpage=1#comment-43 Heather from Kodiak HC Thu, 19 Nov 2009 18:30:27 +0000 http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=49#comment-43 I love this Kayla especially the line "I’ve reached for the stars and/kept them captive in ketchup bottles." there's such whimsy and hope in there. I like it :) I love this Kayla

especially the line

“I’ve reached for the stars and/kept them captive in ketchup bottles.”

there’s such whimsy and hope in there. I like it :)

]]> Comment on Observing the bees… by Kayla http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=21&cpage=1#comment-39 Kayla Tue, 10 Nov 2009 00:50:28 +0000 http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=21#comment-39 The poem is about watching bees...so I called it "Observing the bees"...because that's what it's about. The poem is about watching bees…so I called it “Observing the bees”…because that’s what it’s about.

]]> Comment on [Untitled] by Margi http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=13&cpage=1#comment-38 Margi Tue, 03 Nov 2009 16:16:45 +0000 http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=13#comment-38 Always enjoy your work. Looking for more! ...Soon? Always enjoy your work. Looking for more! …Soon?

]]> Comment on [Untitled] by gfxdug http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=13&cpage=1#comment-10 gfxdug Wed, 29 Jul 2009 12:37:21 +0000 http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=13#comment-10 Beautiful work. I could hear, smell and taste the setting. Keep up the wonderful work! Beautiful work. I could hear, smell and taste the setting. Keep up the wonderful work!

]]> Comment on Observing the bees… by gfxdug http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=21&cpage=1#comment-9 gfxdug Wed, 29 Jul 2009 12:33:14 +0000 http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=21#comment-9 This is fun...do I want to know where the motivation came from for this? ;) I agree, "musty nectar" is a great phrase! This is fun…do I want to know where the motivation came from for this? ;)

I agree, “musty nectar” is a great phrase!

]]> Comment on Observing the bees… by Diane http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=21&cpage=1#comment-8 Diane Wed, 29 Jul 2009 12:04:51 +0000 http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=21#comment-8 Beer as "musty nectar", awesome! Beer as “musty nectar”, awesome!

]]> Comment on [Untitled] by Diane http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=13&cpage=1#comment-7 Diane Wed, 29 Jul 2009 12:02:54 +0000 http://teaandtunafish.com/?p=13#comment-7 I like this one a lot! Particularly the "rainfall of language" and your description of the subway. I like this one a lot! Particularly the “rainfall of language” and your description of the subway.

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